Realizations & Revelations.
February 18, 2013 § 23 Comments
The weight of my thoughts
is enough to bring me down
The depth of my emotions
can drown all of you
Yet I can’t displace a single
brick of the wall you’ve
Tagged: Floyd., metaphor, poetry
Beautiful 🙂 Your poems flow so smoothly 🙂 I just love it 🙂
Thank you! 🙂
I think this is right on. Wall-builders are good at what we do
You’re one of the wall builders?
Oh I resigned from wall-building — now I work tearing them down…brick by brick 🙂
Never mind being good at building walls you are very good at spilling the emotions of one who has hit the wall….. believe me I know. I have written a couple of poems on this subject. 😉
Dude. You’re the best.
Where is the link?
there’s a few I hope they do not bore you !!;)
This is very touching. Well written.
Thank you very much!
Are they? Thank you!
Oooohhh I’ve felt this before…
Thank you Rosy!
Not being able to dislodge a brick now and then teaches us some oft well needed humility.
Yes it does. You’re right Carl.
Curious if the wall-builder really resides within you. Nice work.
I’d rather break em than build some!
wow i loved your poem!
can you please check out my poem http://mygroovyblog.wordpress.com/2013/02/19/a-leaf-on-the-ground/ ?
Thank you so much!
I am gonna read all of your poems 🙂
Thanks a tonne!!
Thank you 🙂
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